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Tree - Vision of Shadows

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Because there's literally no fanart of this guy last time I've checked, I decided to draw some of my own!

I'm really proud of this tbh! What do you guys think?

Constructive criticism is not only welcomed, it's appreciated and encouraged!
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

the front legs look kind of off, one seems thicker than the other and since it is slightly farther away it should appear a little thinner
same problem with the hind legs, the cat's left leg appears thinner than the right one when it should be the other way around
the fur looks great except for a part on the tail
the thickness of the lineart is a bit inconsistent (quite thin on the face, very thick on the hind feet and ears)
the ears look kind of weird? I apologize if it's just your art style, but the tuft of fur should connect onto the bottom of the triangle, and the fur in the ear should like like the fur you drew for the rest of the body Not sure if that is a rule, but I think it would look better that way. (i could explain better what I mean if I could draw it out, let me know if you'd like that)
you drew lineart seperating the orange from the lighter underbelly, but not anywhere else?? (chest, feet, muzzle)
the fur you drew on the body looks great though, and the patterns and the dynamic pose are really nice. The simple background works pretty well. but the character isn't centered on the image, but that could be fixed pretty easily